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Teen Poetry #6

pain

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

0 posted 2003-05-18 01:22 PM

The pain I felt you will never know
the times I couldn't let you go
you hurt me deep inside
you never showed me any emotions you let them hide
many nights I laid there crying
while inside I was slowly dying
I gave you all my love, I opened up to you
but your hate for me grew
you began hitting me
the pain was to much mentaly and physicaly
why couldnt you love me
what did i do to make you hate me
to make you rape me
those questions will still remain
I will always feel the pain

"Hard days made me, hard night shaped me"

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

1 posted 2003-05-18 03:58 PM

Please tell me what ya think
Carrie

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2003-05-18 07:54 PM

nice poem

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

dani
Junior Member

since 2003-05-10

Posts 46

3 posted 2003-05-20 08:46 AM

beuatiful *shocked speechless with amazement*

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-05-20 12:22 PM

ouch. I really feel for ya girl. I hope thinfs get better for you.
Jenni

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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2003-05-20 02:20 PM

This has a lot of pain in it... It was a great write, but full of emotion. I liked it.

      - Cody -

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