Teen Poetry #6 |
It's Different Now |
teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Sometimes today is different Than yesterday Sometimes I don't feel the biting pain Of your words To hate you must first have loved And I did So long ago And now I hate Because you hate I thought maybe you were different And you are but you still cause me pain Maybe not physically But it is just as bad because I am nobody To you And I believe you I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
You aren't nobody...just because someone who once loved you thinks you are, you don't need to believe them. Don't listen to them! Well done! ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Elizabeth is right, you're most certainly someone, no matter what anyone might think or say. You wrote this, didn't you? You have a gift, and that alone makes you someone special. Great poem! Keep on a'writing! always here with you. Now stay and hold my hand and together we'll go somewhere new. ~Rich~ |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Good write. One of the lines used to be my signature on here. "To hate you must first have loved." Ironically, I heard that in 7th grade from someone that ended up being my first love. He hates me now. *sad sigh* Nice poem. Jenni There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Ohh...this was good!! I mean, I REALLY like this..LOL. Oh yeah, you're quote at the bottom is awesome. Great job! ~Jess "What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Mental pain is just as bad as any other. No one deserves this. Hang in there... --Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Words and feelings can hurt more then physical... I hope things work out. Thanks for posting. |
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