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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Sitting, looking out the window, Watching the rain pour down, My heart melts onto the pages, Of this tragedy… Called my life, Sliding down the window pane, As if they are the tears on my cheeks, “Release the pain” I whisper to myself, Just let it all go, Wash it away with these painful tears, Move forward, Let my lips smile, Instead of quivering from the horror, I feel this way during the night, When it comes in the day, It’s worse…the nightmares reappear, Everytime I breathe, I feel it pushing me down, Further away from reality… Almost, Idle. "What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly." |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Amazing... I had to read it twice just to make sure I got it all. Your writing seems so familiar... Hmm. Anyway, the poem was awesome. Keep on writing! -Lioness |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Very good, very very good! I really like this one. The way you used the window for symbolism...really thought that was great! Nice write, hun! Wonderful! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
0.o?? Didn't I just reply to this? *shrugs* Oh well, it's just as good as it was 10 minutes ago! always here with you. Now stay and hold my hand and together we'll go somewhere new. ~Rich~ |
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