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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 82


0 posted 2003-05-15 12:23 PM



This girl broke my heart
But I miss her like hell
I knew I loved her from the start
But she has me living in a mental hell
I think about her night and day
I wonder why she had to do me this way
Ever since she been gone I've been in a deep depression
She was the center on my world
Which is crushed, so I lack any type of aggression
I'm love sick with no cure
When she said "I Love You" I thought is was pure
I guess not, otherwise I wouldn't be writing this
I never knew love could hurt like this
My heart hurts when I think about her
My eyes water when I think about how we were together
I'm telling you, this is a sadness like no other
What makes it harder is that I'm hiding it from my mother
I'm love sick y'all
Pictures of her give me the chills
I got the type of sadness
That makes you wanna O.D on prescription pills
My life no longer has any type of thrill
My mind ain't right, I get real bad chest pains
I'm not healthy
I'm love sick, can someone please help me

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snoduck
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since 2002-11-15
Posts 99
Selah, WA
1 posted 2003-05-17 04:22 PM


I'm sorry to hear that..  I guess there's more to  life than love, but it's so hard to let go. Believe me I know how you feel... your words felt like they were pulled out of my soul. I too am love sick I'm afraid... hopefully things will get better for all of us. Very nice poem, btw.

-Erica-

Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-05-17 05:18 PM


Great sentiments coming from a guy, I think we've all had our hearts broken,the worst part of it all, is that the person usually doesn't know or care, you seem like a loving person, someone with a kind and gentle heart, there should be more guys out there like you....good write...
Jenn

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

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