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Six Months
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Six Months |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
SIX MONTHS It’s been so long Yet I’m still holding on I can’t let go I’m not that strong You memory Can’t help but phase me Driving me crazy I’ve already drown Six months ago You don’t understand How bad I hurt inside I couldn’t fight it So I lied I told you I moved on That it doesn’t bother me I’m still not complete A part of me is missing If you didn’t love me You shouldn’t have Said you did That you’d always return To save me On your beautiful White horse You shouldn’t have Made so many promises That only knew Wouldn’t be kept I was so in love And you destroyed that I can’t move on You haunt my dreams Making me cry and scream I shouldn’t have believed In you, your stories I thought the truth Would came out As you drank But I guess not It forced you to lie Cheat, and hurt me Too much anger Too much pain Has built up inside The day my soul died After your silence Of six months. |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 Don't worry. Sooner or later someone better will come along. ^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~ |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
I think we should get all the lousy rotten males who have ever hurt us all together and have a men-bashing party. Argh. Nice job on the poem. Some things just flow without having a noticeable rhyme scheme, and that was one of them. Where knowing how ends and talent begins. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Well I'm sorry to hear you had to deal with this! Being hurt by someone you love ALWAYS sucks. I hope things begin to go better for you.  ~Elizabeth Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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