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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-05-14 05:33 PM


Your music plays incessantly.
The twiching of eyes behind closed lids.
The color of hope hidden beneathe blue shadows.
Your petals brush my skin,
tempting me to give in.
Its hard to give.
To give in to this display,
this obvious display of your affections.
To what level do you love me?
does my integrity inspire you, to become me?
How bad do you need me.
I fear the answers are too complex to be spoken aloud.
And when it comes down to it, this is ridiculous.
All this time spent on nothing,
All these days spent with time.
What a waste, it all will fade.
Thats where broken hearts go,
to the junk yard of memory,
love is left to rot, like it never lived.
We're back to the begging.
Redeposing our hurt, that comes back to haunt us.
Its almost worse than when it was real,
ALMOST.
So I'll shed these invisable tears,
that have long been dead.
This incessant, and reluctant pain..
its the reason.

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FlyingCloud
Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
1 posted 2003-05-14 06:40 PM



Yup. Unfortunately, that seems to be a major part of love. But other than that, great write!

^~^If we cannot live so as to be happy, let us least live so as to deserve it.~*~
Immanuel Hermann Fichte

peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-05-14 07:58 PM


Wow! This poem was great, I am practically speechless. I was going to put my favorite part on here but I would end up putting it all here! This one is surely going into my library..Great job! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

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