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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2003-05-13 05:48 AM

if i said goodbye tonight
would you worry?

if i walked away
would you come after me?

if i called your name
would you listen?

if i died tonight
would you care?

if you said good bye tonight
i would worry.

if you walked away
i would come after you.

if you called my name
i would listen.

if you died tonight
i would care?

we always ask if
but never get an answer.

so i won't ask if again
because i don't wanna hear the answer.

so no more questions
and no more answers.

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2003-05-13 11:12 AM

I don't ask those questions because I wouldn't want to know the answer either but I've never had anybody to ask those questions of.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2003-05-13 07:17 PM

i like this poem

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2003-05-13 08:16 PM

wooohoooo someone that likes my poem and the ataris!!!!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

4 posted 2003-05-13 08:17 PM

Interesting, Robin... I like it, and I agree that it can often be better to just not ask. Kinda sad, but I liked it. THanks for posting.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2003-05-14 05:11 PM

If you said goodbye the wrong way I would worry.
If you walked away upset I would come after you.
If you called my name urgently I would listen.
If you died tonight I would do more than care; I would cry and then write a heartwrenching poem in your honour. I would live my life to the fullest because I'd be living life for the both of us.

*big hugs*

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

6 posted 2003-05-14 06:04 PM

Ahhhh so many questions...
Anyhoo, I liked this one a lot...it kinda made me think about the people in my life and how they would answer those questions. It makes you realize who really cares and who really matters.
Nice work.

"Last night I had a dream that we went to Disneyland...went on all the rides, didn't have to wait in line..."
Awesome band indeed.

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2003-05-14 08:38 PM

rhonda sis that brought tears to my eyes. i love you sooooooooo much sis! man tears........ you are my sis no matter what never forget that!!!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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