Teen Poetry #6 |
I've done it again |
teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Here I had hoped to avoid injury to myself To avoid the wrenching pain And here I had hoped not to lie again To avoid the guilt inside And here I had hoped to be ready for Friday Regionals are coming up you see But no I was stupid Just like I always am I managed to injure myself and I think it just may be because I lied I guess God didn't like that I lied To get out of the house and go hang out with friends But I did and now it's too late Because now my shoulder is done in I don't know how I'm supposed to run like this It hurts just to move my arm Typing this takes awhile So how am I supposed to run I regretted lying the moment I did But i figured oh well it's already too late So I clamped my mouth shut and went on with the game And do you notice the pain it's brought me But I had some fun I think I don't know if it was worth it but I am so sorry I lied 'Cause I think it was God's punishment And I think he may not let me run I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
I found that very sincere. thanks for the nice read!!! -Erica- |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Oh babe! Karma really does suck sometimes doesn't it? I really am sorry for what happened and I hope the arm heals fast but sometimes you get taught lessons in ways that you really didn't want to learn them! Beautiful write though, great way of expressing your feelings. ~Live and Laugh~ Always strive for excellence never perfection. |
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Rapsodia New Member
since 2003-05-14
Posts 1 |
Greetings, I liked your treatment of this event. You kept it simple and honest; more importantly sincere. Sometimes acknowledgement is enough to move on from, there needs not be any regret if you try to make better. Best to you, Taryn |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Just so you know I am going to Regionals TODAY!!!! I am incredibly excited! My arm still pains me but it's workable. I just hope that I can go on to States! Thanx everyone who replied. I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so. |
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