Teen Poetry #6 |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
A single golden ray of light, On prismatic morning dew, And through the crystal bright, Wonderous silence, for few. Nature holds her breath, A moment of glory, in the dew, And Life holds back Death, A simple stunning thing to view. The World has yet to Wake, And black Night doth now sleep, Fortunate those, who take, This simple beauty, fathoms deep. +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965) [This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (05-12-2003 11:37 PM).] |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
Very nice, I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poetry, but this was good... really good. made me feel like I was reading shakespeare or something similiar. but anyways a very nice poem, i liked it a lot. thanks for sharing!!! P.S. i like the picture also -Erica- |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Ooooh... yes... Shakespeare is my hero. And that was awesome. |
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