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SCREAMIN
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 51
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0 posted 2003-05-10 05:53 PM


everythng was going swell
or as well as swell can be
out of nowhere i fell
and there was no one to rescue me

no one sees through my eyes, but i
and i havent seen what my eyes CAN see
something ive learned is that looks will lie
not yet have i seen a thing to cause the tears flee
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blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
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1 posted 2003-05-11 02:29 PM

Ooooh... I like that...

It's very different... almost like a jingle or something.

Keep on writing!
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