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Teen Poetry #6

Beloved Sea Monkey (haha)

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-05-10 05:19 PM

My dear sea monkey, are you hungry?
I shall feed you, and you shall live healthy,
My wonderful sea monkey, do you want to play?
I shall visit you, and you shall be happy.
My wonderful sea monkey, are you tired?
I shall turn of the lights and let you sleep.
My beloved sea monkey, placed by the window,
Your Sunburnt? Silly sea monkey, dont you like the sun?

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

1 posted 2003-05-10 08:50 PM

See that? It brought a smile to my face!

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-05-11 01:20 PM

Haha!

I always love funny poems, they're refreshing.
I wrote a poem once about my pet fruitfly!
Enjoyed this one.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

3 posted 2003-05-11 05:35 PM

Haha, great. I like funny poems, and it would appear than the legend Stinkie Twinkie has done a runner, so maybe you're our new hope?! Well done anyway, this flowed nicely, and sea monkeys rule!
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-05-11 05:44 PM

aww....*remembers Stinkie Twinkie* He was the coolest. Wonder what he's up to these days. Anyway, interesting poem, it brought a smile to my face.(Quite a feat actually, I haven't had the best day) Good job.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (05-11-2003 05:47 PM).]

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