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Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2003-05-09 12:15 PM

This is indeed my darkest day.
I've finally realized...
That I'm all used up!
No more ideas, no more anything.
No more sweet salvation,
Or locking myself deep in my words.
Now it's like dying in an empty pool,
But still falling under waves.
Try to write but the words won't...
They are afraid to come out!
I don't know what to do,
What do you think?
I've been sitting in the abyss of emotion,
And yet I have nothing to write about.
I am more in love with her now than ever,
My life is at the crest,
And finally starting to look more appealing,
I have hobbies, a job, and dear, dear friends.
I am healthy...
A little overweight...
But who couldn't stand to lose a few?
I have all these things.
I am HAPPY!
But I have lost the one thing that got me through.
Got me throught the mud, and lonely nights
Filled with evil thaughts,
And pill bottle staring contests.
Is it because I'm finally happy?
Is it because I've gotten it all out.
I can't write!
My dream is gone, expired due to...
I DON'T EVEN KNOW!
You will definantly be seeing less of me.
Like I've said before,
"The inkwell has dried up."
And this time I don't think its writers block.
Well, Passions, Pip, Piptalk,
I think it's time to say a very sorrowful...
Good-bye.

I leave all of these protective icons to sykopathicfreek and Newguy!
May your writings take you places,
I have not visited.

Tabitha LeAnn
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 50
Kansas, USA

1 posted 2003-05-09 02:52 PM

NOOOO!!! UR TOO GOOD TO STOP

. I LOVE YOUR WORK. THIS POEM IS SO SAD AND PPL CAN DEFENITLY RELATE AND IF YOU CHOOSE TO NOT CONTINUE TO WRITE IM VERY SORRY YOU'VE LET SUCH AN OBVIOUS TALENT OF YOURS BE WASTED. IF YOU DO CONTINUE TO WRITE I WILL LOOK SO FORWARD TO READING YOUR WORK.

sykopathicfreek
Junior Member

since 2003-04-22

Posts 24
ohio, usa

2 posted 2003-05-09 03:26 PM

Dont leave just wait a while and try. Things will come back. some old feelings will be back. not to get you down but they will. i was happy and still am, but it all comes back in one way or another. I am sure that newguy and a lot of people agree that you should stay.

"Pain is but weakness leaving the body"

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-05-09 11:47 PM

DON'T LEAVE!!! I LOVE YOUR POETRY!!! PLEASE STAY!!!

Other than that...

"Now it's like dying in an empty pool,
But still falling under waves."

Really enjoyed that line. The whole poem was beautiful. Nice job!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2003-05-10 12:16 PM

so that's it ya just gonna give up? let me tell you something just cus you can't think of anything to put down as your own for right now is not the reason to leave trust me i thougt that was why i wanted to leave but you know ideas started coming back to me. just give it time. while your mind is trying to think read some peoples poems maybe you'll get ideas. just don't leave.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-05-10 02:08 AM

Very good poem, I like it alot.
I have been there before too,
I thought I had nothing left to write about.
You CAN write about happy things too,
and pain comes and goes, you never know when it will be back, though I wish you a lifetime without any.
Don't despair on your talent.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

cmonkiki
Junior Member

since 2002-10-18

Posts 11
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2003-05-12 10:42 AM

Damn it darkness. I love your words. I love the way you put them together, hell I love you. You already know that. Like everyone says, you'll be back, and you know it.

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

7 posted 2003-05-12 06:38 PM

PLEASE STAY!! YOUR WORDS ARE WONDERFUL! I LOVE WHAT YOU WRITE!

If you go, PiP will be missing one of its finest poets.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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