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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-05-12 06:38 AM



There's noting left
to verify.
For everything has
been proven true.
I felt the tears begin, though,
I rarely cry.
Nothing's ever hurt me so bad,
except this picture of you.

I could almost feel
the happiness.
That was held behind
your eyes.
But there was a restless betrayal
inside your kiss.
Your hugs, your emotions, your love...
were all lies...


If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (05-12-2003 06:39 AM).]

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cmonkiki
Junior Member
since 2002-10-18
Posts 11
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-05-12 10:40 AM


This was good. I liked it alot.  I read Darkness's ADD Escapades and noticed that you said that your boyfriend has add.  Well darkness is my boyfriend, and it is funny to watch, i agree with you.  It's nice to know that i'm not the only one who thinks what they do is funny.
Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2003-05-12 03:47 PM


Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.  Yeah, it is so funny..lol

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

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