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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Watch me disappear… I've never felt like this Remembering all I should've said But kept it locked up instead Now you pretend I don't exist. Everything no longer clear… So I speak to no one About all that’s bothering me Not proud of the things I’ve done Hiding the things I don’t want you to see. Nothing left to say now… Pictures don’t lie I saw the truth in a flash Wishing I could say goodbye but instead watch them turn to ash Wanting to fix things…but how? If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 This poem touched me. It spoke to me in a way that other poems didn't. Well done.+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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Tabitha LeAnn Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50Kansas, USA |
WOW!! SO MOVING. I LOVED THIS POEM IT WAS HARD TO UNDERSTAND BUT I THINK THAT WAS WHAT MADE IT SO GOOD THAT YOU HAD TO THINK ABOUT WHAT IT WAS SAYING. I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK. EXCELLENT POEM  |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I really liked this Staci...great job hun. Love ya! ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Great job, Stac. I really like this one. And considering I know EXACTLY what you're talking about...I felt it even more. Really good one. Love's. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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