Teen Poetry #6 |
The Road to Happiness |
sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
The Road to Happiness The road to happiness is long and no one road is the right path. Every day with every decision we make our road changes. Some roads just seem to have no end, and others are just a dead end. Sometimes it seems we get off the beaten path and now must carve our own way. Who's to say wich road is right or wrong? If we take the road more traveled, are we still making our own way? If your content with the easy road, then is it really your road to happiness??? That is something only you can decide! M.P.D Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awesome mike! i like this one a lot. the message in it was a good one. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
I agree... nice idea... good poem... i'd suggest do not put the three question marks (???) after that line... Maybe it's just me but somehow even though it is a strong question, I believe it takes away from something. |
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