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Teen Poetry #6

lost teen love

jayd
Junior Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 13

0 posted 2003-05-06 04:14 AM

The skys were blue
but in my eyes the days were dark
nothing and no one but him could light up my life
and then one day he wasnt there
he was gone and the light was gone to
nothing could bring these feelings back to me
nothing but him
now hes gone i dont know what to
all i ever do now is feel really blue

I miss you so much
i know you miss me to
i need you back to light up my life once more
please come back to me i just need you to walk through that door

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-05-06 11:16 AM

yep...this poem perfectly symbolizes the essence of "lost teen love"...good job.

Jeremy H.

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

2 posted 2003-05-06 07:56 PM

yeah i agree... perfect title... though some how the wording is a little strange, i get the message and can relate to it... good poem

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