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Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-05-03 04:27 PM

Everyone is lieing,
Everyone is gone,
Everyone is mad at me,
Everyone is wrong,
Everyone is mean to me,
No one really cares,
They hit they punch they kick,
They even pull my hair,
Everyone cheats off me,
None of them get caught,
Everyone picks on me,
It never matters what I thought,
This is what I think,
This is how I feel,
This is what happens,
I fear I'll never heal.

heart_of_ice
Junior Member

since 2003-02-18

Posts 14
England

1 posted 2003-05-04 12:30 PM

i can relate.....you do heal, in time.

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

2 posted 2003-05-18 11:55 PM

This was a great poem and i think that everyone can relate... keep up tha good work and i'll keep reading...

~*Holly*~

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2003-05-19 12:30 PM

sorry that things are so rough for you...you probably don't want to hear this, but they do get better in time, so just hang in there k? Well I hope things start to look up for you soon! Very nice expression!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

[This message has been edited by skyshine (05-19-2003 12:31 AM).]

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

4 posted 2003-05-19 03:01 PM

Ahhhh... wonderful. The rhyme and rhythm are all put together soooo nicely.

Short and simple... very well done.

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas

5 posted 2003-05-19 08:27 PM

Well done! very good poem
~Carrie~

"Hard days made me, hard nights shaped me"

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

6 posted 2003-05-19 10:09 PM

Extremely well written. I can relate to this, as well. Yes, I can relate very well. This is not only what I faced up until a few years ago, but what my brother faces now. Just remember that you're not alone, and that no matter what they do or say, you do heal in time. Keep up the great work!

'Rich

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

7 posted 2003-05-20 02:40 PM

Give things time... Pain can't last forever. Just hold on. Thanks for posting this, I enjoyed it.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

8 posted 2003-05-20 04:20 PM

i like this poem a lot... and i can relate... this is really nice... well done

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

9 posted 2003-05-21 12:18 PM

This is really good...I used to feel that way myself. Fortunatly things got a little better for me and I hope they do for you to.
Jenni

There are three kinds of people in this world, those who can count, and those who can't.

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