Teen Poetry #6 |
Hallelujah |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Something I wrote today in class... I have really been wanting to write something that I could work out for guitar to use as a praise song in church sometime, and I think I just might be able to pull this one off. Let me know what you think. HALLELUJAH There’s not a word I could say That you haven’t heard before But I know there’s none more worthy So I sing to you once more Chorus: Hallelujah, Hallelujah You are worthy to be praised Hallelujah, Hallelujah There’s not a day I’m not amazed Hallelujah Everything that You have made Water, earth, wind and sky You have created all we see And I lift your name on high Chorus Hallelujah, Hallelujah You are the king of kings Hallelujah, Hallelujah There will come a day When every soul sings Hallelujah Hallelujah, Hallelujah… (Fade to end) - Cody - |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok cody doing as you told me to do i am replying to this poem. it's great i loved it. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Oooh... yes. I think you could definitely use that in church. You might even add another verse or two, being that right now, depending on how many times you repeat it/how fast you play it, it's going to be hard to make it very long. Good job. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cody~ I really like this and I think it has the makings of a beautiful praise song. Your talent is really growing lately, and I am very much enjoying reading you. Very nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
The tone of this actually reminds me of a song by Sanctus Real called "I Love you". A very simple praise song, but with so much more to offer in humbleness. I think you did an excellent job on this one. I would've liked to see an extra verse, though, but that's only a suggestion. Keep it up! -Leah |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Ce serait une chanson impressionnante!! J'aime vraiment votre modèle de l'écriture, j'espère lire plus de vous bientôt! Jenn **It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not** |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Right... I understood none of that, but that's okay. lol - Cody - |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Here let me translate for ya! It would be an amazing song!! I like really your style of writing, I hope to read more from you soon! Jenn **It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not** |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cody, this is a really bautiful praise song. I think it would be great do sing this in Church. Hugs, Ethel |
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