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sykopathicfreek
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since 2003-04-22
Posts 24
ohio, usa

0 posted 2003-05-02 08:30 AM


I cant help the way you think of me.
Your too judgemental.

Everything you ever want me to do,
is all hypocritical.

Whenever you want me to stop,
I'll just keep going.

You think your lots of fun
truth be known, your boring.

You think your wierd and different,
but your all the same.

Your music is on MTV
and its lame.

Everyone there dresses all alike,
you fit right in with them,
with your eyeliner and your spikes.

The music is not original,
only posers like it.

You've disgraced all of us,
you need to be hit.

If you are truly different,
why do you look like him?

You look like your together,
oh yea, you are twins.

You have your own anthem,
"so throw all your hands up."

Your video is on TRL too,
just drain the cup.

Black streaks coming down,
and the cheap goodwill clothes,
Your so sad but you never frown.

*I wrote this poem because I hate How pop punk makes it so easy to be different. Fact is, its not that you think your different its that you can feel it.*

"Pain is but weakness leaving the body"

© Copyright 2003 Josh Robinson - All Rights Reserved
blueyedlioness
Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
1 posted 2003-05-02 10:37 AM


Ugh. TOTALLY. I hate that.

Nice job of bringing out the truth behind those black-eyeliner, spiked-collar wannabe poser punk bands. How annoying.

I mean, the music's okay... just not how they broadcast their poor little selves all over television.

Anyway, I'm finished now. :p

BrokenDreams
Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
2 posted 2003-05-02 11:55 AM


I agree completely.

I do see myself as different...but I don't flaunt it like some do...that's just me(lol kind of a pun there)
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

punkrockerrobin
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180
Sparks, NV
3 posted 2003-05-02 08:54 PM


ok don't diss my GC!!! lol i like em. but yea it does make me mad when all the little kids have to look like them. eh me on the other hand i dress the way robin wants to dress. nice poem i liked it!
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

SimpleDiscourse
Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 79

4 posted 2003-05-03 11:13 AM


haha. i agree with you totally. good charlotte just..makes me mad. way to go.
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