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Teen Poetry #6

Silence So Loud

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-05-01 04:08 PM

I'm cryin'
I can hear them
Still calling my name

I'm tryin'
to block them out
but it echoes all the same

Why can't you see....
What these voices....
are doing to me....

They're tearing me apart
sinking lower all the time
down down to the floor

They've taken my heart
and hollowed it out
I don't want to fight anymore...

Why can't you see....
What these voices....
are doing to me....

THE SILENCE SCREAMS!!!

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

1 posted 2003-05-01 04:47 PM

I like it! It kinda relates to myself as well! keep up the work!

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-05-02 10:42 AM

*sigh* I know how THAT feels.

Nice job.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-05-02 11:51 AM

As with all your poems, I love it. It really hit home, maybe thats why I like it.
Jenni

To hate you must first have loved.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

4 posted 2003-05-03 09:19 AM

Yeah, I think I know what you mean when you say silence screams!

Sometimes it can get so loud and unbearable that it's worse than if you're in a club.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2003-05-04 01:19 PM

Oh, yes this one is a keeper! hehe

You have my vote! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

6 posted 2003-05-05 08:53 PM

This one is AWESOME...I love the format and writing style. Really good rhyming scheme. You never cease to amaze me, Stac. Awesome job! You got my vote!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

7 posted 2003-05-05 09:25 PM

true true

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