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Teen Poetry #6

Tranquil Season

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-04-21 08:48 PM

The cold winds slowly calm,

And before I know it snow is falling.

Gracing everything I see.

The bitter cold, although harsh,

Never ceases to bring tears to my eyes,

And warmth to my soul.

When snow falls,

Everything stops.

Time stands still.

Silence is deafening,

If you can hear it.

And you are finally at peace.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

[This message has been edited by SilentTears (04-21-2003 08:49 PM).]

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

1 posted 2003-04-21 08:54 PM

very nice

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-04-21 08:57 PM

Yep, ya got my vote! Good work here homie! I've read this before and wanna read it a million more times. Oh yeah, you chose a great title for this poem! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

3 posted 2003-05-05 10:23 PM

Well done is all I can say.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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