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sykopathicfreek
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since 2003-04-22
Posts 24
ohio, usa

0 posted 2003-04-30 09:18 AM


I am different
I am Josh
I am not adient

I am wierd
I am not like you
I am revered

I like you
I like me
I like not what you do

I love change
I love variety
I love the strange

I may be crazy
I may be stupid
I may be lazy

But at least I am not the same
No one else is like me
I might as well be the one you blame

I may seem peculiar
I may seem strange
I may seem unfamiliar

I am what I am
You cant change that
I am my own man

"Pain is but weakness leaving the body"

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Darkness
Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2003-04-30 09:54 AM


Yes... Yes... INDEED! You are definantly different. And this poem was different. But I still liked it anyway. I see you've learned some new vocabulary words in English Class today. Ha Ha! Just kidding!

DaRkNeSs

FlyingCloud
Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
2 posted 2003-04-30 05:21 PM


I think that we need more poems that portray the message 'I am what I am' does. The core message is that people shouldn't try to change other people.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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Sparks, NV
3 posted 2003-05-01 02:47 AM


hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm reminds me of the first poem i ever posted here on pip. nice write.
robin

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cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

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