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newguy04
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since 2003-04-23
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0 posted 2003-04-30 11:44 PM


I dont know what this is its just randomm thoughts i wrote becase i have some major problems with a girl.  This is consuming me

Without sorrow there can never be happiness
Life is a one failure after another
Happiness is just the outside
Who is actually happy?
Being a teen not understanding this
Relationships are hard
Until a surprise
Everything is happy, you think u got it made
Then bam life gets turned up side down


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1 posted 2003-05-01 01:35 AM


Short, simple, and straight to the point... good job
quote:
Everything is happy, you think u got it made
Then bam life gets turned up side down

These words ring so true.

Good luck with the girl

"The best trick in basketball is putting the ball in the hoop, but if you bring the hoop down with you, I'll give you a cookie."

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2 posted 2003-05-01 02:36 AM


ok relationships are nothing but stress when you are young. so try not to treat it like that's the one person you are gonna spend the rest of your life with cus trust me there will be others. take care!
robin

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