Teen Poetry #6 |
The Power of Love |
sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
The Power of Love The power of love, is that what you make it. Don't take it for granted or ever forsake it. Don't ever long for or over strive... cause the power of love will just pass you by. Don't be bitter and don't be cold, or you'll find yourself old and all alone! The power of love... is a beautiful force, secure by its nature and strong for its source. The power of lvoe captures and inspires, it brings out our best... our innermost desires. Even when you think love is lost or all hope is gone. The power of love... will forever live on. M.P.D [This message has been edited by sing'n fool (04-30-2003 04:56 AM).] |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
*flips through poems* *stops at this one* Oooh! I like it! Nice job. Basic rhyme, but great way of keeping it together and making everything fit. |
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Margarita Juanita New Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 2Hickville, USA |
I love it when poems have great rhyming! Awesome job |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww mike that was so purdy!! true love is strong and very urtful at times but all depends on how it is used. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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