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sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
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Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-04-30 04:53 AM


The Power of Love

The power of love,
is that what you make it.
Don't take it for granted
or ever forsake it.

Don't ever long for
or over strive...
cause the power of love
will just pass you by.

Don't be bitter
and don't be cold,
or you'll find yourself old
and all alone!

The power of love...
is a beautiful force,
secure by its nature
and strong for its source.

The power of lvoe
captures and inspires,
it brings out our best...
our innermost desires.

Even when you think love is lost
or all hope is gone.
The power of love...
will forever live on.

M.P.D

[This message has been edited by sing'n fool (04-30-2003 04:56 AM).]

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blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 289
USA
1 posted 2003-04-30 03:49 PM


*flips through poems*

*stops at this one*

Oooh! I like it! Nice job. Basic rhyme, but great way of keeping it together and making everything fit.

Margarita Juanita
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since 2003-04-30
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Hickville, USA
2 posted 2003-04-30 04:22 PM


I love it when poems have great rhyming! Awesome job
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3 posted 2003-05-01 03:07 AM


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww mike that was so purdy!! true love is strong and very urtful at times but all depends on how it is used.
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