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A sister's loss
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A sister's loss |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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It's you again yes i am here why did you come back? cus i wanted to say sorry sorry for the pain? and for the tears it's to late why do you say that? because you have already gone no i am still with you it's been 10 years yes but i am still with you i didn't want this to happen i know but it did life is so cruel, you were so young i'm still your brother but you are gone remember the car that hit you i am in your heart sometimes i forget you but i remind you don't i? yes i feel the push you remind me with see i am still with you yes you are still with me. hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! [This message has been edited by punkrockerrobin (04-28-2003 08:42 PM).] |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok this is about my brother that was hit by a drunk driver when he was 9 in '93 and he is gone now i miss him. robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aw, robin, I'm sorry. There's definitely emotion in this. Though I don't know how it feels to have something like this happen, I imagine it's pretty sad. The poem was good, though... Thanks for sharing - Cody - |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
That is just soooo sad. You miss your brother the way I miss my father. It seems that we can't do anything to stop the forces of nature. What will be...will be. All we can do is pray that they have gone to a better place, and that we will see them again someday. Good job with this poem. Sing'n Fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok if ya didn't get this it's me talking to my brother if he was still alive robin hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
awww  I didn't know Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
omg sis i thought i told you! i'm sorry. hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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