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FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

0 posted 2003-04-29 05:53 PM

When you feel your time is over,
And that your day is done,
There is one thing that will work,
Fly to the Sun.

When the Night has come,
And the time has come,
Look past the darkness,
and Fly to the Sun.

Because it truely isn't over,
Your life has just begun,
Do not give up hope,
Just look to the Sun.

Darkness isn't Night,
Nor has the ending begun,
Let your love guide you,
And look to the Sun.

So many give up hope,
Before their day is done,
But let this message come,
And fly to the Sun.

I was tired of seeing all sorts of depressing poetry...I hope this helps.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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[This message has been edited by FlyingCloud (04-29-2003 05:55 PM).]

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-04-29 07:08 PM

I've got a couple of good "hope" poem floating around...I really liked this one...so uplifting.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-04-29 09:37 PM

A nice repreave from all the darkness that seems to be floating around in everyone's lives right now, nicely done, it was a good excape sort of poem
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

3 posted 2003-04-30 05:40 PM

Hello! Thanks for all your replies! I will try and get around to replying to some of your poems.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
Unknown

Android 18
Member

since 2002-02-20

Posts 61
Austrailia (My DreamLand)

4 posted 2003-05-01 01:28 AM

This is such a nice poem! It brightened up my mood just that little bit

"The best trick in basketball is putting the ball in the hoop, but if you bring the hoop down with you, I'll give you a cookie."

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2003-05-01 02:38 AM

good poem i liked it.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2003-05-01 09:35 AM

Yeah, definitely a well-written poem.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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