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Teen Poetry #6
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OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19
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0 posted 2003-04-28 05:29 PM

Liquid Eyes

I see it in your unmade face
Through your liquid eyes
Beneath your broken skin
Under a falling sun
All your nightmares are coming true
And I know you hate the world too.


A series of bad days. *love* to aaron woodside... my stalk-ee.

~cassi

[This message has been edited by OtherSideOfTheMirror (04-28-2003 07:31 PM).]
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FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
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A little place inside my head
1 posted 2003-04-28 06:07 PM

I think that this poem is very deep. I had a really bad day today, so this poem helped a little.
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