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sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-04-17 03:32 PM

Beautiful Thing

I'm not good at expressing
words of the heart.
I don't speak what I feel,
but I hope you've known from the start.

Though words do not come so easy to me
The way that we are
is a beautiful thing.

To hold you,
and kiss you
is never enough.

It's magical, wonderful
beautiful stuff.

You make me feel warm
you make me feel safe.

Nothing makes me happier
then just seeing your face.

You don't question,
or judge.

You just love me for me
now that in itself is a beautiful thing.

M.P.D.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-04-22 11:56 AM

very nice...i really like this one. it just goes to show you that some people out there do appreciate you for you. keep it up.

J.D.H

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-04-23 11:32 PM

wow! I really liked this one..especailly for a first post it was extremely good! It had that warm happy feeling about it without sounding sappy..Bravo..!
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2003-04-28 03:38 AM

ok how come all you men here know how to make a girl go weak at the knees with your poems but in real life you're like uh duhhhhhh ummmmmmmmm......... omg i'm just saying in general that most guys need to be more open with your words in person!! sorry just thinking of the nevada men who are blind! lol great one mike!
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

4 posted 2003-04-28 03:53 AM

I'm putting this here to update the replies because they're having a problem updating themselves...don't mind me

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

5 posted 2003-04-28 06:37 PM

I haven't had a boyfriend in a LONG time! But even then, this made me remember the good times!

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

6 posted 2003-04-28 06:45 PM

That was so beutiful.
-Kara <><

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

7 posted 2003-04-28 06:46 PM

cool

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