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A humble thank you
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A humble thank you |
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sykopathicfreek Junior Member
since 2003-04-22
Posts 24ohio, usa |
I will never forget that night her and I fought, we both said some bad things and we were both wong I'd never thought I'd hear that not from my mother, she did nothing to helpful she just made it worse. I didnt want to live anymore and she couldnt believe me. I told her how i felt and she flushed it down the toilet. She lost all of my love the moment she said it, those words will haunt me forever the words i dare not say. They were painfull shaper than a razor, they cut cut through me like a hot knife through butter. We were in the living room and i started to cry, she said "whats the matter" i replied "i wanna die." I needed her comfort but then she said it, and it hit me hard, "go kill yourself then" I would have done it if it werent for the darkness. It saved my life and gave me the comfort i needed, to pull through her hatred and for that i thank him, Thank you sam I am eternally grateful. you've saved my life helped to make it much better, thats what youll always have on me and I've never thanked you. "Pain is but weakness leaving the body" |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
I can't speak. -DaRkNeSs |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
Well, that brought back things I was trying to forget... *sigh* I know whatcha mean, though. Well-written, well-thought out... you might check the spelling...  Good job.  |
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