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Like A Tornado
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Like A Tornado |
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Obsolete Junior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 43 |
-Pardon me if I'm posting a bit much, I've just had a lot of ideas running around that I'm trying to put in a jar. Like a tornado, you blew everything down Yet I was in a ditch, avoiding your wreckless fit My grandparents' house, torn to shreds My parents' cars, demolished beyond recognition Your own family's belongings, reduced to rubble I crawled out, trying to make sense of it all The days passed, we no longer spoke As soon as you had come, you were gone Now as I step outside, I look around at everything rebuilt And in the distance, I see another tornado on the way |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hummm..are you speaking of a literal tornado? I was just thinking it could be literal or symbolic. So..yes I like this very much, especially the beginging. I don't see any problem with posting a lot as long as you are willing to respond twice as much. Hope everything turns out well for you. ~Lex...  |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
i would like to think of it as symbolic. women....if only we understood. but hey if we understood then there might not be as much interest huh. |
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