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BabieDoll
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0 posted 2003-07-08 05:01 PM


Shadows cast upon the wall
Dance gracefully under the moonlight
First being one person
Then becoming a thousand
Yet beating is only one heart

Images linger with a dead mind
Frantically searching for a memory
A little piece of evidence
To finally bring closure
To this lost soul walking the Earth

Emptiness is now the air that’s breathed
Paining lungs each time they inhale
Loneliness follows a never-ending road
In darkness as black as slate
Leaving no room for regrets

Courage is the key for survival
Taking each day as it comes
Pushing aside the fears
The memories and the wounds
So you can live a life that you want to *

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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1 posted 2003-07-09 10:12 PM


J. Lynn...

Another great write, girl. I enjoyed it. It can mean a lot to a reader if they're in the right state of life.

Glad I read it. I'd say more, but I just got back from a run.

~Titus

"I want you to hit me as hard as you can." No, really, I do.

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2 posted 2003-07-09 11:30 PM


Hey hun! This was a great poem! Esp. the last stanza! I absolutely LOVE it! I think I may print this one out! LOL. Oh my...I can't really say how much I like this! Oooooo!! Hehe ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

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