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Eternal Gravity |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Watch the clouds rolling in, as the storm approaches. The rain and lightning starts and darkness seeps through My Open Window. Dreary images cover the ceiling dancing upon the walls leaving me here in an awful State of Being. Slowly falling apart and flying, into an unknown abyss. Like a meteor crashing to Earth, my heart drops To The Floor. Pieces of memories, linger within my mind. Securely fading, But not fast enough, to catch me As I Fall. Falling down...down into the depths past shattered hearts and broken dreams. Losing my sanity With Each Breath. Written by myself and Jenn (BabieDoll) If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (04-24-2003 04:05 PM).] |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Mmm..good job! You guys have my vote ~Jess  "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This is REALLY good you guys! You had good visuals and an awesome use of words! Definetly got my vote! Great write! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Ya!!! another poem by you. I like almost all your stuff and this is no exception. It has my vote. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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