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sykopathicfreek
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since 2003-04-22
Posts 24
ohio, usa

0 posted 2003-04-24 08:24 AM


EVERYTING AND NOTHING
Having nothing is hell and hell is everything.
So is having having everything actually having nothing?


ANARCHY
Iced over system, system covered in ice
oh wouldnt that be nice
Police, Army, Marines, Navy, Coast guard
try to rule the world

Iced over system, system covered in ice
oh wouldnt that be nice
chaos, people rule, no government, and true freedom
thats what i want to see

Iced over system, system covered in ice
oh wouldnt that be nice
No one man or woman, No one group
absolute power corupts absolutly

Without coruption your left with an
Iced over system, system covered in ice

oh wouldnt that be nice?


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Darkness
Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2003-04-24 09:32 AM


As most great artists start out... with Pain and Political Views! Ha Ha! I think your perception of the frail boundry between Everything & Nothing is quite interesting, also from my point of view, it is sometimes very accurate. The shortness of it as well, perfect! You said your idea and you were done with it.

You got a vote fromt this cat!
dArKnEsS

aaron woodside
Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256

2 posted 2003-04-24 10:56 PM


The first one blew my mind, but I think you had too many havings in there.    I vote.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

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