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2 small poems |
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sykopathicfreek Junior Member
since 2003-04-22
Posts 24ohio, usa |
EVERYTING AND NOTHING Having nothing is hell and hell is everything. So is having having everything actually having nothing? ANARCHY Iced over system, system covered in ice oh wouldnt that be nice Police, Army, Marines, Navy, Coast guard try to rule the world Iced over system, system covered in ice oh wouldnt that be nice chaos, people rule, no government, and true freedom thats what i want to see Iced over system, system covered in ice oh wouldnt that be nice No one man or woman, No one group absolute power corupts absolutly Without coruption your left with an Iced over system, system covered in ice oh wouldnt that be nice? |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
As most great artists start out... with Pain and Political Views! Ha Ha! I think your perception of the frail boundry between Everything & Nothing is quite interesting, also from my point of view, it is sometimes very accurate. The shortness of it as well, perfect! You said your idea and you were done with it. You got a vote fromt this cat! dArKnEsS |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
The first one blew my mind, but I think you had too many havings in there. I vote. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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