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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast 
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maybe I lost something back there, in my room alone with my indulgences maybe they lost my mind maybe I found myself this year, in your eyes alone with your forgiveness maybe you found my heart maybe I grew up one day, I missed it losing my innocence maybe I lost my soul maybe I let you down that day, I lost faith losing my own mind maybe you saved me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Sometimes there are just too many hypotheses, too many logical possibilities to account for, and you speak of these feelings ever so well! (sad sigh) Here's hoping certainty comes into play soon, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
Thank you for reading my poem! *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love your poetry. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice writing.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
very good love your work. you choose your wording well, and know how to express yourself. good write. Sing'n fool Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
sorry, forgot to change user name Sing'n fool Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!! |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
I enjoyed this. Keep it up. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
*sigh* I'm jealous. :p Very professionally written. |
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