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OtherSideOfTheMirror
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0 posted 2003-04-22 06:14 PM


Sometimes I wish I could just fall forever
At the peak of insomnia
Chasing sleep through space
Tripping and feeling that rush as I try to catch myself
Waiting for my lids to close
That is the constant in life
Waiting
Always another thing to look forward to
Like insomnia
It becomes the human condition.

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WinterWren
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1 posted 2003-04-23 02:14 PM


I really like this one!
My favorite line is,"that is the constant in life, waiting."
I hate not being able to get to sleep!!
Well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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