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Teen Poetry #6

Me As Me

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

0 posted 2003-04-20 04:06 PM

I am unique in my own way
That's what everyone should say
They should believe in each other
And love their father and mother
To appreciate the little things
About each other
And love ourselves and everyone
We just want to have fun
Run through the sun
And smile
because we are all beautiful
Noone should care
About looks, or what you wear
You are fresh, you are new
And no matter what you do
be yourself
And be you as you,
And i will be me am me
In everything that I do.

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

1 posted 2003-04-20 10:26 PM

i liked your poem
i totally agree with you, we should all be unique
keep up the good work

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

2 posted 2003-04-21 09:26 AM

i agree with lindsay up there

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-04-21 06:58 PM

This is a really sweet poem. It's very simple...but it's very good. It really speaks...and has feeling. And I totally agree. People just need to stop being so shallow!!! Nice write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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