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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
We don’t hang out, or talk on the phone We have nothing to say when we’re left alone You say I am special, and you can talk to me One of the few you can actually see You are only there when it’s convenient for you Who you are, I thought I once knew I trusted you, thought you’d always be there Thought I meant something, thought you cared But it turns out my friend, you don’t need me at all You have the rest of your friends you can always call You said you needed me, that we’d always be friends But our friendships taken a turn, down a dead end The worst part of it all, is that you don’t see or care Can you even call us friends, there’s nothing we share Friendship is undoubtably about love and trust If we’ve lost those things, where does that leave us I always thought we’d be friends forever That meeting you, was a fateful endeavor Never again will you know the tears I hide Or how this forgotten friendship tears me up inside *any thoughts on this would be greatly appreciated* Thanks, Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
It is very sad when friendships end. Nice poem. I enjoyed it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Jenn, this brought me to tears, dearest friend, I know this feeling because for a while I was in love with a beautiful girl and she said she loved me but then hid a secret from me for eight months that she never loved me and had someone else and never talks to me anymore! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs of healing your way, dearest friend, I hope you find all you desire, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Drummerboy06 Junior Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 46Indiana |
Wow, this is good. Nicely written, the rhyme flows rather nicely, too. The rhythm is very good, though a few parts are a little rough, but this is barely noticable. Nice job, i look forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is a good write it is sad to be hurt by a friend  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is quite sad..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Oh wow, all of the friendship I've thought were so tight and suddenly it's like they were never there at all...I was really tight with a group of from the time I was 18 till about 21 and suddenly everyone had new friends and it was all over....that was forever ago, so anywho....I feel ya here, and that's because you did an excellent job of telling what the deal was...great job. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
It's very heartbreaking when a friendship ends. But just remember, you will always have someone who is there for you, and loves you. Beautiful poem. Add another to your vote total! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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