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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87


0 posted 2003-04-19 10:55 AM


she's give up hope
silence screams
fate lowers her finger
points it at her broken soul
the devil laughs
shakes hands with temptation
her tear drops
explode as they hit the floor
water droplets scatter
the molecules broken
run, run, run
just like her blood
a red river running
fed by the silve scythe
the tears are afraid
they run away
leaving the girl
in the ice cold hands
of death
of the devil
of fate...
her gloriously
peaceful
eternally burning hell
ruled by her own
silent screams
for help

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SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-04-19 11:13 AM


I love this!!! I enjoy your work...as I look forward to reading more!!! Nice job...really awesome!!!!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

[This message has been edited by SilentTears (04-20-2003 09:18 AM).]

BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
2 posted 2003-04-19 01:43 PM


I love it!! I look forward to reading more of your work, as I always seem to like it.
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

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