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Teen Poetry #6

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tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

0 posted 2003-04-19 10:53 AM

nobody knows
what she does
alone in her room
how she sits on her bed
with the knife on her arm
tracing old scars
not hiding at all
you just have to
look to see
listen to hear
the blood flowing
the silent screams
of a girl
at the end of her rope

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

1 posted 2003-04-19 11:14 AM

I REALLY like this one. And I can relate to it as well...very nice write! You have my vote.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

2 posted 2003-04-19 11:19 AM

thank you! i enjoy your remarks silenttears

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-04-19 01:40 PM

Wow. This could have been written about me. I've been in that exact same position. Good write, you have my vote.
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-04-19 02:41 PM

My friend is in the same position and trying to get help for it but I can definitely relate to this one, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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