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Teen Poetry #6

Caught With Care

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-04-16 06:08 PM

"Caught with Care"
By: Janna Shaffer

If you only knew, what you meant to me,
When you were around, it made me happy,
You invaded my thoughts, and made me smile,
It seemed so perfect, and so worthwhile,
But little by little I started falling away,
We were losing each other slowly, day by day.
How could I let this great thing go to waste?
How could this happen, the tears on my face?
I just kept falling, but you were still there,
And when you caught me I knew that you cared.
Now nothing comes between, between you and I,
You said that you cared, and proved you were right.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-04-17 02:49 AM

enjoyed this hey work...keep it up.

J.H.

[This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (04-17-2003 02:53 AM).]

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

2 posted 2003-04-17 06:03 PM

You have a good way with words. That was pretty. -Kara <><

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

3 posted 2003-04-17 08:05 PM

thank you guys for commenting, I am glad you liked my poem

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-04-19 02:28 PM

Nice job, I enjoyed this!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

5 posted 2003-04-19 02:35 PM

Reminds me of too many times in my life when we drifted apart and I was never caught as I fell, Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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