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StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-18 01:53 PM

Looking for truth, she's giving up.
Confusion surrounds her soul,
for she finds no answers.
The hate she refuses to believe,
even when it is her only friend.
Looking for her place,
the word "lost" mirrors in her eyes.
Through the glaze of lonliness,
she sees one bright star.
Wishing will get you nowhere,
that she did not know.
But that star held life,
an epiphany of hopes and dreams.

[This message has been edited by StephyBob07 (04-18-2003 03:27 PM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-04-18 03:07 PM

Hi StephyBob07!!!

I very much enjoyed reading your poem, and wanted to Welcome you to the Passions Family!

I look forward to reading more from you--a very fine debut it is!

check you e mail for a special greeting!

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-04-18 06:08 PM

Great first post! Welcome to passions!!!! I really enjoyed your poem.

Keep that pen on writin'! Laterz.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

3 posted 2003-04-18 06:33 PM

Lovely first post, but you'll hear that plenty. Let me think of something else... hmm.. I like that you created a beacon of hope and yet added that wishing in itself will get you nowhere. You didn't just show one reflection on the water's surface.

Jaime

the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

4 posted 2003-04-18 06:38 PM

Hey stephanie!! I told you had a gift you just have to find it. That was a wonderful poem. I welcome you to the poem family!!
-Kara <><

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

5 posted 2003-04-18 08:13 PM

Welcome to PIP
I look forward to reading the rest of your poems, this one was very well written, I enjoyed it

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

6 posted 2003-04-18 08:32 PM

Welcome to Piptalk!!!
Judging from this poem, Im very glad to have you here!!
I really love this piece, the last few lines were especially good! And the title really caught my attention.
Well done!!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

7 posted 2003-04-18 09:28 PM

Welcome to piptalk! You had an excellent first write! I really enjoyed reading this! Make sure you keep writing and keep posting! I look forward to reading more of your work!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

8 posted 2003-04-18 09:44 PM

Whoa! This is your first write? Jeez! You wrote a great poem for your first post! Keep writing, I enjoy reading it and can relate in some aspects! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

9 posted 2003-04-20 04:54 PM

thanx so much everyone for your encouraging words and welcomes! i am definitely going to keep on writing for a long time! ~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

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