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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2003-04-13 06:01 PM


The field, the court
We could always go back to that
Where the grass was always green
The wood on the floor would always gleam
Where for an hour we were on top of the world
No homework, no family problems
Only the cheers of the crowd
Deep breath in, let it out
This is our time to shine
You see them, your rivals
You see your friends, they are cheering
A rush of adrenaline rushes over you.
The whole school is counting on you
Win this and its all over, you will be a champ
You remember what your coach said in the locker room
"You lose this and no college will want you"
Those words ring in your ears
The sport you used to love to play has become
a job.
You take a breath in, the buzzer goes
You forget the crowd, the screams, the music
The threats from your coach mean nothing
Its you, all you
This is what it was like
Just play for you
It won't matter if you win or lose
You got back that childlike passion for a game
This is what you fell in love with
Not the crowds, the fame, the school
The final buzzer, the crowds leave
a smile on your face
The lights are turned off
The snack bar closes
Everyone goes home, it doesn't matter if you won or lost
You go home and sleep, remembering the feeling
of the ball at your hands or your feet
off into a time when only the field, the court
mattered


" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

[This message has been edited by wvplayernotreally (04-14-2003 07:08 PM).]

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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
1 posted 2003-04-15 06:46 PM


Aw, Mal, I'm so sorry I missed this!  I wasn't ignoring it, I just didn't see it.  I really liked it, I think a lot of people are that way...  They get caught up in things and forget their reasons for doing it in the first place.  Life can be like that, too.  Anyway, I really enjoyed this one and hope others will see it too.  Thanks for posting!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2003-04-15 09:15 PM


I really enjoyed this poem,
I think it described well what it's like to just let everything in the background fade.
So many now-a-days only care about winnning.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2003-04-20 06:07 PM


Like it, sounds familiar, my daughter plays softball in the National team here in the Netherlands. Rushing off to vote!

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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