Teen Poetry #6 |
the field |
wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
The field, the court We could always go back to that Where the grass was always green The wood on the floor would always gleam Where for an hour we were on top of the world No homework, no family problems Only the cheers of the crowd Deep breath in, let it out This is our time to shine You see them, your rivals You see your friends, they are cheering A rush of adrenaline rushes over you. The whole school is counting on you Win this and its all over, you will be a champ You remember what your coach said in the locker room "You lose this and no college will want you" Those words ring in your ears The sport you used to love to play has become a job. You take a breath in, the buzzer goes You forget the crowd, the screams, the music The threats from your coach mean nothing Its you, all you This is what it was like Just play for you It won't matter if you win or lose You got back that childlike passion for a game This is what you fell in love with Not the crowds, the fame, the school The final buzzer, the crowds leave a smile on your face The lights are turned off The snack bar closes Everyone goes home, it doesn't matter if you won or lost You go home and sleep, remembering the feeling of the ball at your hands or your feet off into a time when only the field, the court mattered " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." [This message has been edited by wvplayernotreally (04-14-2003 07:08 PM).] |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aw, Mal, I'm so sorry I missed this! I wasn't ignoring it, I just didn't see it. I really liked it, I think a lot of people are that way... They get caught up in things and forget their reasons for doing it in the first place. Life can be like that, too. Anyway, I really enjoyed this one and hope others will see it too. Thanks for posting! - Cody - |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really enjoyed this poem, I think it described well what it's like to just let everything in the background fade. So many now-a-days only care about winnning. WinterWren |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Like it, sounds familiar, my daughter plays softball in the National team here in the Netherlands. Rushing off to vote! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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