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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Sitting here venting pouring out the unrelenting pressures that fill my mind while in a trance like state Unaldutered thoughts captured on paper for too long I've fought to hold these feelings at bay convincing myself I dont feel this way Collectively Expresively These words remain to be a part of me Manifested in ink by a man on thr brink notions of hate, joy, anger, and love (or lack thereof) Like volatile waves crashing against a lone rock these thoughts pound in my head Releasing them while moving in rhythm with the clock just grinding lead.. |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
 Does this guy need a friend? I think that this poem (and I may be wrong) expresses a certain type of loneliness that can be cured with company.^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Haha, perhaps but more or less life has just been chaos and there arent many ways I can express it. I'm sure a girlfriend wouldnt be halfbad however most females bring more drama and confusion than joy into a mans life.. thanks for the reply |
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