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DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2003-04-16 07:44 PM

Wrapped up in your kisses
breathing love into me
your eyes are speaking
silent whispers of the heart

Fingers caressing my soul
your subtle touch, so gentle
tears me away from reality
and on way to ectasy

Heart pounding next to me
I am your's eternally
close your eyes angel
my breath is yours

Hold me into you forever
for I've found my haven
far beyond my dreams
inside the man I love
...you...
-this is for my baby

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-04-17 12:13 PM

Kiley... beautiful

I'm glad you've shared this with us. I'm definitely voting for this

Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2003-04-17 12:19 PM

Kiley! lol You probably dont know or remember me, but I remember you. Haven't seen you around lately, but if you've been around I'm sorry I've missed your stuff. I really enjoy your writing and this one just continues my being impressed. Great write.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

3 posted 2003-04-17 03:44 PM

hey there kid!!! this was really beautiful I think just about every guy reading this is feeling a hint of jealousy...it's not very often we hear something that sweet...nice job.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

4 posted 2003-04-17 04:21 PM

very beautiful, and well said. Way to capture emotion. Two thumbs up.

mike

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2003-04-18 12:21 PM

Smashing.

I loved it. I would take out the "...you..." line, and just end it there, but the poem as a whole, I love. Sensual, loving, happy.

~Titus

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (04-18-2003 12:21 PM).]

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

6 posted 2003-04-19 05:12 PM

Cwboy- of course I remember you

I haven't been around for a long time, but that doesn't mean I forgot about you!! Thanks for replying, hope all is well

Jeremy- Wow! Been a LONG time, good to see you posting again, as well. thank you so much for your kind words

TITUS!!! I haven't heard from you in soo long it's crazy. Where did everyone go? I hope they aren't all gone for good, we will have lost some extremely brilliant minds. I respect your suggestions very much, but I think I'll leave the last line

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

7 posted 2003-04-19 10:55 PM

Great poem, truly emaotional and loving, I love it! great job!

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