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CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

0 posted 2003-03-19 01:19 AM

I sit alone and think
In the field of broken dreams
Sorting through broken promises
Ripped at the seams

I sit and I wonder
About the trials of life
We waste so much time
Feeling hurtful pain and strife

I try to brush away the tears
From my heavy heart
It's so hard to keep going
When you don't know where to start

I run around in circles
Do I stop or do I begin
In the field of broken dreams
It's a race you never win

People come and people go
But I stay here just the same
Those people will not save me
For it's me they have to blame

Once again I'm all alone
Sitting in the rain
In the field of broken dreams
Lost with all my pain

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

1 posted 2003-03-19 12:28 PM

I absolutely loved this poem! Great work. We definitely do waste too much time with all the pain in life. Time to live more and have less worries! Loved the poem! You have my vote.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-03-19 02:00 PM

This was beautiful! Wow, I can relate to it so much.
A truly wonderful poem, PERFECT!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-19 07:21 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is a very heartwrenching write, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs your way to ease your heart! (sad sigh) You always write with heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, you have my vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

4 posted 2003-03-20 05:42 PM

Thank you all for your replies. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 2003-03-21 10:57 AM

your poem has much sadness in it, yet I can see rays of hope also. I like it very much.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-03-24 03:21 PM

Lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2003-03-24 04:51 PM

That was an awesome poem!!! I really really liked it....such harmony...and the feelings were well expressed..good job...you have a kind heart...
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

8 posted 2003-03-25 12:59 PM

I liked this...Very heartfelt and true...

*applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-03-26 03:19 PM

I liked this sad poem very much... great job! *S*

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

10 posted 2003-04-04 04:08 PM

That was a very thoughtful poem that really expressed your feelings well.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

11 posted 2003-04-04 04:19 PM

I liked this alot. good job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-04-05 02:34 PM

CSwtThng~
This is a beautifully written piece.
I enjoyed the message and the read.
Very nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

13 posted 2003-04-12 07:27 PM

Very good write....I'm voting!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

14 posted 2003-04-15 08:47 PM

very good got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

15 posted 2003-04-15 09:35 PM

Good write, I liked it.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

karebear07
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since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

16 posted 2003-04-15 09:54 PM

That truly spoken. I really enjoyed that because i can relate alot to the beutiful words you wrote.
-kara

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

17 posted 2003-04-19 09:46 PM

I really like this one. I felt it the whole way through. I think everyone has that feeling every now and again...beautiful job. It's got my vote!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

18 posted 2003-04-19 10:47 PM

I love this, I thought about it alot and feel like I am you in this poem. Great job, you have a gift, please dont ever stop using it

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