navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #6 » Bitter Cold
Teen Poetry #6
Post A Reply Post New Topic Bitter Cold Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Peacebri
Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44


0 posted 2003-04-16 05:20 PM



The world is so cold
We must stand ready and bold
For our country we fight
All day and throughout the night
We don't have time to dream
All around us people scream
We stand in the heat
And shall not be beat
We stand our ground
to victory is where we're bound
We shall fight
And the cold shall bite
The cold inside
Where my soul had died
And we fight the cold
We do what we're told
So we keep on fighting
And the cold keeps on biting

~DEDICATED TO THE SOLDIERS FIGHTING OUR WAR~


© Copyright 2003 Peacebri - All Rights Reserved
karebear07
Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas
1 posted 2003-04-16 05:32 PM


That was so awesome bri!! You got talent. spoken words from the heart!!
                 -Kara <><

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
2 posted 2003-04-19 09:25 PM


Nice poem! Really good rhyming scheme. I like, I like very much!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #6 » Bitter Cold

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary