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Bitter Cold
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Bitter Cold |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
The world is so cold We must stand ready and bold For our country we fight All day and throughout the night We don't have time to dream All around us people scream We stand in the heat And shall not be beat We stand our ground to victory is where we're bound We shall fight And the cold shall bite The cold inside Where my soul had died And we fight the cold We do what we're told So we keep on fighting And the cold keeps on biting ~DEDICATED TO THE SOLDIERS FIGHTING OUR WAR~ |
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karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
That was so awesome bri!! You got talent. spoken words from the heart!! -Kara <><  |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Nice poem! Really good rhyming scheme. I like, I like very much! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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