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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-04-16 03:49 PM



...I held you hand...

I saw the sadness,
in your eyes.
I asked "What's wrong?"
"Nothing." You lied.
You saw me watching,
as you cried.
But you turned away,
and tried to hide.
Nothing I could say,
could change your mind.
This is just a delay,
things will get better, in time.
You just have to believe,
Another love, you will find.

...All will be well eventually...

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
1 posted 2003-04-16 04:38 PM


Wow...I really liked this one Staci. Good job!

Love ya!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
2 posted 2003-04-16 05:40 PM


Good write.

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

karebear07
Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas
3 posted 2003-04-16 06:04 PM


I really enjoyed that one. Can relate alot.
         -karebear07

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
4 posted 2003-04-16 06:49 PM


I really liked this one, Stac. Good write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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