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Teen Poetry #6

Poetry

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-04-16 05:52 PM

Pen in her hand
She writes her words on paper
Her only means
Of escaping reality

Clearing her mind
She places her feelings
On each line
Letting herself go
Through each stanza
Leaving all bad memories
As memories alone
Her writing gets swifter
The poem flows over her
Releasing herself
Of all her anguish
All the problems of the world
Diminish before her
It’s only her and the writing

Pen in her hand
She writes her words on paper
Her only means
Of escaping reality *

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

jaysh
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

1 posted 2003-04-16 06:27 PM

I really liked that alot, and it is easy to relate too.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-04-16 06:49 PM

I like this one, Jenn! Very good write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

3 posted 2003-04-16 07:13 PM

Absolutely loved this! Fantastic work. I'm not one to do a full critique very often, but I'd have to say there is not much here to critique anyway. Great! And its so true ... isn't it?
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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