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Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01

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Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-04-16 03:11 AM

Lovely Fragments

Oh, blessed past.
These shattered pieces about me
resemble lovely things.

Oh, blessed days.
What of beauty could these be...
broken as they are?!

Oh, my broked, bleeding bits..
yet you seem so meant to fit.
Were you once a love?
Speak the truth to me.
My heart and her's once seemed to fit
as you do, lovely fragments.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-04-16 12:55 PM

Beautiful poem! I really love the first 2 stanzas.
Well done.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

karebear07
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since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

2 posted 2003-04-16 07:07 PM

Loved the first stanza very capturing. Loved it -Karebear07 <><

SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-04-19 08:21 PM

The first two stanzas are very captivating! Very nice! It flows well. Nice write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Jenn Cirrincione

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4 posted 2003-04-20 09:17 AM

Ahhhh I remember you, the good old days!
Nice job here, I liked what you did with it.

Jenn

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

5 posted 2003-04-20 10:19 AM

wow. as always your poems amaze me... great job! --the jessica

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