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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-04-13 07:42 PM

In the sadistic minds of the unrefined,
Is where my body lays entwined.
Through twisted thoughts and broken dreams,
And shadows hidden as it seems.
Confusion consumes and engulfs my soul,
Wandering through the dark with no control.
It seems a road with bends and turns,
Inside my soul that cries and burns.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

[This message has been edited by SilentTears (04-15-2003 09:45 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Megan Decker - All Rights Reserved

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-04-13 07:55 PM

Good choice of words..I like this! Esp. the first line, oh yes yes that's a keeper! haha..Good job! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

2 posted 2003-04-13 09:11 PM

I very much like the imagery (sp?) and I LOVE the title, heh heh. Awesome job.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-04-14 05:32 PM

wow...great emotion, extronanily expressed, amazing job..
~lexy

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-04-15 02:21 PM

Wonderful poem!
The length is just right and the wording use is perfect!
Excellent!!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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